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The story of the gatekeeper, Grandpa Qin, is a continuation of an old article, part 19. 

The story of gatekeeper Qin



Author : www1983xxx (Heart as Still Water   ) Word Count
: 8654


********** ...   Proving my authorship is difficult, as it's been too long since my last post, and I can't provide strong evidence. I can only recount some events from back then as supporting evidence: The first chapter of "The Gatekeeper" was first published in August 2004 on the website "Venus" (later renamed "Joyful Buddha"). It was subsequently published on three other websites simultaneously: Lamb's Writers and Erotic Coastline. I stopped writing for over two years after reaching chapter 12, then resumed writing in March 2006. I then published it on Lamb's Writers and Joyful Buddha until chapter 18 in December 2006, after which it remained unfinished until now.   The ID on both websites is "Heart Like Still Water," but the initial ID was the current "www1983xxx," which was later changed back to "Heart Like Still Water" by the moderators. This happened on both websites. At the time, the moderators of the "Happy Buddha" forum included "Yang Guo" and "Piaoling," while the moderators of the "Lamb" forum included "Yufeng Erxing" and "Bin'an Jushi." However, I am ashamed to say that I no longer have their contact information. If any moderators of sis are still in contact with the moderators of these two websites, please verify this information. I would be extremely grateful! I registered on sis a long time ago, intending to use the ID "Xinru Zhishui," but it was already taken, so I can only use "www1983xxx."   Please verify the authenticity of this information. If verification is not possible, I will not complain and will simply leave with regret. Regardless of the outcome, I would like to express my gratitude again to the sis moderators!   I had long since given up on continuing the story, but this winter I had a sudden urge and searched for the novel on Baidu. I discovered that besides the earlier author "Shouqiang Daixing," two other authors, "Nanzihan" and "Anye Shijia," had also written continuations. I was surprised and honored, and at the same time, I felt an itch to continue writing.   Actually, I hesitated for a long time before deciding to continue writing this sequel. I've read all three authors' sequels repeatedly; the plots are rich, and the sex scenes are exciting. I'm ashamed of myself for not being able to match them. Most importantly, "The Gatekeeper" already has a complete story . Regardless of whether it differs from my outline, it has given readers who have read "The Gatekeeper" closure and made up for what I couldn't do. Now, I suddenly want to start writing again. First, it's unnecessary; second, I would feel bad for the three authors; and third, I'm not sure if I can finish the story in the sequel. Is it really necessary to continue ? After hesitating for a long time, I still decided to continue. Because if I didn't think about it, it would be fine. But once I started thinking about continuing, I couldn't help but imagine how the plot would develop, how the characters would talk, whether to write sex scenes, and whether to write doggy style or riding style, etc. Therefore, I decided to continue. At the same time, I would like to sincerely apologize to the three authors.   Before proceeding with the main text, it's necessary to clarify the previous events. Due to the passage of time, it's possible that everyone except (including the three authors) is unclear about which parts of the story in "The Gatekeeper" are my own work and which are the three authors' brilliant continuations. Therefore, I'll clarify: My work consists of 18 chapters, but it differs from the commonly circulated version 1-18 online. Chapter 17 mainly describes Fu Xiaozhu being knocked unconscious by a suddenly flying soccer ball. After waking up, she finds herself in a boy's house and subsequently has a passionate encounter with him. Chapter 18 mainly describes Liu Xiaojing, heartbroken from a breakup, having a passionate encounter with Uncle Qin, which is then witnessed by an unknown person (this is where Chapter 19 begins). Fu Xiaozhu encounters the beautiful international student, Landis, on her way back to her dormitory after class.   I've also attached chapters 1-18 as an attachment. I would be honored if interested readers could offer their feedback! **********                 ...               "Cough cough..." After   coughing   a few times, she finally regulated her breathing .   Her   hands were still   trembling slightly ,   and   her face flushed as she answered the phone...   ... ****************   ...   Liu Xiaojing didn't care about Grandpa Qin's feelings at all. On the contrary, watching him bewildered was a great pleasure: "Hehe, hurry up and tie it on, good fortune is coming soon!"   Grandpa Qin took a rose-colored silk scarf, its exceptionally smooth and soft texture making even his rough palms feel...


































































































It felt very comfortable, so she raised her hand and covered her eyes with it, then tied a slipknot behind her head.

A faint fragrance wafted from the silk scarf and entered Grandpa Qin's nose. This scent was all too familiar to
him ; it was undoubtedly coming from the beautiful yet lewd Liu Xiaojing before him.

Liu Xiaojing touched Grandpa Qin's already aroused groin: "Good boy, little brother, wait for your sister to come back."
She laughed and left the gatehouse.

In the room, only Grandpa Qin remained, sitting blankly on the bed.

"Sigh, I really don't understand young people these days..."

Grandpa Qin sighed. Although he had been "deeply" involved with these young girls for over a month, his thinking
still couldn't keep up with or even understand their various behaviors.

After being caught in their "affair" last night, the solutions Liu Xiaojing came up with were
all crooked ways like "dragging her down" and "having sex with her," instead of the righteous
paths he saw as restraint and repentance; he couldn't understand why that girl was actually about to be "draggled down" by Liu Xiaojing...
What was wrong with this world?

On the other hand, Grandpa Qin was filled with anticipation, an anticipation that even surpassed his initial anticipation of dealing with Xiaozhu.
After all, the unknown is always more alluring than the known. The only pity was that he had to remain blindfolded, preventing him from
knowing whether the girl was beautiful or ugly, fat or thin.

He couldn't help but chuckle to himself, "Whether she's beautiful or ugly, you old codger, you've still gotten a great deal
..."

Lost in thought, he heard a sound at the door, followed by light footsteps entering the room.
The footsteps suddenly stopped: "Hey, come in quickly, what are you waiting for?" It was Liu Xiaojing's voice.

There was no reply, no footsteps; the girl outside seemed to be hesitating.

After a while, Liu Xiaojing's voice rang out again: "Hehe, you can wait patiently. I'm not in a hurry. If
anyone passes by outside, don't forget to call them in so we can all chat."

This had an effect. A girl's voice murmured softly from the doorway: "Xiaojing,
look at him... is he blindfolded? I don't want... I don't want him to see me..."

Although the voice was very low, Grandpa Qin could still recognize that it came from the same
person as the exclamation from last night. He felt that although this voice was not as clear and melodious as Fu Xiaozhu's, nor as charming and alluring as Liu Xiaojing's,
it had a unique simplicity and naivety.

Liu Xiaojing chuckled: "Don't worry, Grandpa Qin is as honest as a block of wood.
He hasn't moved an inch since just now."

Tying a silk scarf casually behind one's head like this is just for show, to keep out honest people, not scoundrels.
Only an honest and simple person like Grandpa Qin wouldn't even consider taking it off.

The room fell silent for a moment. Finally, another slightly heavier footstep slowly entered from outside the door,
but the hesitation of the person making the footsteps was palpable. They took one step, then stopped three,
dragging on for five or six minutes to cover the short distance from the door to the inside.

As the door closed, Liu Xiaojing excitedly called out. Grandpa Qin felt a weight on his legs as a soft
body climbed onto his thighs. Then, a cool sensation ran through his groin as his shorts were pulled down. "Little brother, have you been waiting
long enough for your sister? Well, sister will pamper you now!"

Two gasps came simultaneously. The mysterious girl clearly hadn't expected Liu Xiaojing to be so bold and
direct , while Grandpa Qin felt incredibly comfortable. His erect penis was enveloped in warm, wet fluid, and a nimble tongue
continuously swept and teased the sensitive area of his glans.

"If we let these two fools take the initiative, wouldn't we have to wait until tomorrow morning?"

Liu Xiaojing thought to herself, her mouth never stopping for a moment. Facing
the penis , she fully displayed her oral skills: sometimes licking the entire shaft until it glistened like an ice pop with her little tongue;
sometimes kissing it deeply like a lover, her two beautiful lips sucking and slurping on the penis; sometimes biting it lightly with her teeth,
her tongue tip brushing against the urethral opening and surrounding area like a dragonfly skimming the water; sometimes swallowing it deeply, squeezing it with
the peristalsis ...

"Uh...uh..." Grandpa Qin gasped and leaned back, one hand supporting himself on the bed board, the other tightly
pressing down on Liu Xiaojing's hair. A massive amount of pleasure flowed from the penis like electric currents, then surged
up his spine, finally flooding his brain.

From a corner of the room, a faint, unfamiliar panting sound began to drift in.
At first, it was barely audible, but as the oral sex intensified and the penis grew larger
, it became heavier and heavier…

Suddenly, a loud “squelch” sound erupted. Liu Xiaojing’s movements became frantic; her slender hands
gripped the shaft, stroking it rapidly at an astonishing pace, while she desperately sucked and swallowed the large glans
. Her beautiful hair flew wildly in the dim light.

“Ah…” Grandpa Qin sat up abruptly, reaching out to grab Liu Xiaojing’s head. Under such intense
oral sex, even an iron penis would melt. He thrust his hips forward, ready to ejaculate
deep into the girl’s mouth.

But unexpectedly, his hands grasped nothing. Before he could react, his
penis felt cold as Liu Xiaojing spat it out of her mouth.

The nearly twenty-centimeter-long, glistening penis trembled unwillingly in the air a few times, each tremor shaking off
some of the saliva clinging to it, but ultimately, lacking the crucial stimulation, it failed to ejaculate a thick stream of semen.

"So big…" a woman's voice exclaimed softly.

Grandpa Qin felt extremely distressed; the feeling of being just one step away from reaching the peak only to suddenly slip to the bottom
was unbearable for anyone. "Xiao Jing… hurry…" he reached forward, wanting to grab Liu Xiaojing and give her a
good hard time.

Unfortunately, he was blindfolded and couldn't see anything, so Liu Xiaojing giggled and dodged him. "Xiao Chen, it's your turn
. I'll make it big, and you'll make it small."

"I…" The girl called Xiao Chen hesitated, then cried out "Ah!" as Liu Xiaojing pushed her.

Normally, even two Liu Xiaojings might not be able to push her, but now, distracted, she was
suddenly pushed into Grandpa Qin's arms.

"Ugh..." She instinctively wanted to push him away, but the strong masculine scent emanating from the penis made her freeze
and stop moving.

Grandpa Qin also realized that the girl in his arms was not Liu Xiaojing. His lust-fueled mind cleared slightly:
"Huh? This girl... is so tall..."

His chin barely touched the high, rounded breasts. His hands, which were originally meant to hug her waist,
ended up resting on her plump, round buttocks instead of her left hand.

Grandpa Qin was around 1.65 meters tall, which was nothing compared to young people these days, but for
an elderly person of his age, it was normal. He didn't seem short when he was with Liu Xiaojing and Fu Xiaozhu, but
now...

"...she's probably 1.8 meters tall!" Grandpa Qin was very surprised. Girls that tall were
extremely rare, especially in the girls' dormitory building number two. Several possible candidates immediately flashed through
his mind.

He wanted to analyze which one had been chosen, but at this moment he obviously couldn't concentrate.
The reason was simple: the body in his arms was giving him a very different kind of stimulation.

Grandpa Qin lowered his head and buried his face deep into her chest, rubbing it back and forth. Since the
girl was only wearing a short, thin vest, he could fully feel its firmness and grandeur, no less
than Fu Xiaozhu's. Her bare waist, held by his left arm, was hot and trembling slightly, but unlike
Liu Xiaojing's slender softness, it possessed a certain elasticity and strength, and each tremor seemed to conceal
an unusual energy. His right hand also casually squeezed her buttocks, clad only in tight shorts… large, full, and perky,
far surpassing Liu and Fu's, without an ounce of excess fat. He applied a little force to make his fingers sink in.

The girl's breathing suddenly quickened. Having her three vital areas so lightly touched by Grandpa Qin, she couldn't remain calm:
"You…you pervert!"

Grandpa Qin was stunned.

Pervert?

He had lived a life of law-abiding honesty and integrity… Of course, he later did many lewd things, leading to his
“fall from grace in his later years,” but regardless, being called a pervert was unprecedented and hard to accept.

He couldn’t help but straighten up, wanting to argue with the girl, but this action caused his erect
penis to rub heavily against her private parts. Through the thin fabric, he could clearly feel
the outline of her vulva, the warmth enveloping his glans, which felt very comfortable, as if it were still slightly moist…

“Ah!” the girl exclaimed, her body instinctively thrusting forward.

It was just a normal bump, without any pushing or shoving, but Mr. Qin only felt a tremendous
force coming from her chest and abdomen…

“Ah,” and “thump” sounds followed one after another. He fell backward onto the bed, his huge penis standing upright, swaying
back and forth .

The bed was soft, so Grandpa Qin didn't feel any pain. The girl's breasts and abdomen were incredibly firm and bouncy, leaving a lasting impression .
He was surprised at how strong she was, no less than a man.

"Don't move, I... I can do it myself..." The girl's voice was slightly apologetic,
gradually , probably because she was too ashamed.

The bed creaked as she carefully climbed onto it, straddling her grandfather.
Her gaze was fixed on his erect penis: a massive, reddish-purple shaft covered with bulging
veins , imposing yet somewhat menacing; the egg-sized glans, glistening with saliva, reflected a slightly
glaring light under the lamp; the slightly open urethral opening stared directly at her… She suddenly had a strange feeling, as if it
truly was an eye, somehow penetrating her skin, flesh, and blood vessels, ultimately communicating
with her heart…

Although inexperienced, the girl knew this penis was far beyond what an ordinary man's could achieve: “I hope
it lives up to its appearance, as impressive as it looks…”

When her gaze moved upwards and landed on Grandpa Qin's face, her eyes showed unspeakable disappointment and hesitation. He was too old, far
too old! He could practically be her grandfather, could he really? Although he looked
honest and unassuming , lacking the lecherousness of the legendary old lecher, she wasn't disliked... but that was all.

Her gaze returned to the magnificent penis, and thinking of her physical discomfort, she gritted her teeth: "
At worst, I'll just close my eyes and not look at him."

She slowly pulled her shorts down to her knees, then suddenly remembered something, turned around, and saw Liu Xiaojing watching with gleaming
eyes , as if watching a good show. Her face flushed crimson.

She opened her mouth, but nothing came out, resignedly turning her head away, ignoring him.

The girl grasped the penis, adjusted her position by shifting her buttocks, took a deep breath, and finally slowly sat down
...

"Mmm... mmm..."

Despite her best efforts to restrain herself, she still let out an unbearable moan.

Hot. The moment it entered her, the heat of the penis made her shiver. As it went deeper, the flames
continued to rise, conquering everything in its path, finally igniting the desire throughout her body;

swelling. Incredibly full, her body felt as if it had been forcibly split in two. Her vaginal walls tightly enveloped and clung to the penis,
every tender fold of flesh inside her vagina releasing signals of pleasure with each spasm. Deep within her flower-like core, untouched by anyone before, it was being
thrust into forcefully, an unprecedented pleasure rapidly accumulating;

hard. A mountain-like erection penetrated her delicate place, and no matter how she rubbed, squeezed, or tried to bend
it, it would rebound with even greater force, stimulating her increasingly sensitive nerves even more intensely…

Just one thrust shattered all the girl's previous hesitation. She knew she hadn't chosen the wrong person; she
was so glad she hadn't missed this penis. After catching her breath a few times, she
began to move it, somewhat impatiently but clumsily, drops of vaginal fluid flowing down, wetting his scrotum.

Grandpa Qin was also experiencing a blissful, limp state, each rise and fall of the girl's buttocks causing
him to gasp for breath. Perhaps her sexual skills weren't as polished as Liu Xiaojing's, and perhaps her vaginal
canal wasn't as short, tight, and folded as Fu Xiaozhu's, but
the powerful swayed her buttocks, relentlessly engulfing the penis through her vaginal muscles, was something the two women couldn't match. If they hadn't been forcibly restraining themselves,
they would have already ejaculated.

"Ah...so beautiful...oh..." the girl uttered sounds of pleasure, her movements gradually becoming
more intense . With the "slap slap" of her buttocks, her vaginal fluids splashed everywhere, and both women's thighs and lower abdomens were already...
Covered in a sticky, wet fluid…

hundreds of thrusts passed in the blink of an eye, the room filled with the heavy breathing of three people. Liu Xiaojing
was aroused; she stripped naked and climbed onto the bed, sometimes touching the girl's sexy buttocks and breasts, sometimes
rubbing Qin Daye's arm against her chest, emitting seductive moans.

Qin Daye, pinned beneath her, experienced both pain and pleasure. The tight grip of her vaginal muscles sent
waves , transforming into explosive waves of pleasure that surged through his body—an experience he had never had before.

However, the girl's strength was excessive; each rise and fall of her buttocks not only made the bed creak

but

also strained his back and legs. At first, he tried to keep up with
her movements by arching his back, but as the speed and force increased, his stamina waned, and he simply lay
quietly on the bed, letting her "crush" him.

"Oh...Uncle Qin...faster...faster..."

The girl suddenly leaned down, her upper body pressing completely against Uncle Qin's, her hips swaying incessantly, the
increased intensifying the pleasure, her moans turning into cries.

Due to the height difference, her full breasts landed directly on Uncle Qin's face, the plump, elastic orbs
almost making him breathless... Being "bullied" in every way by a girl, he finally

became "enraged," reaching his hands under her vest and grabbing her breasts hard.

Only when he actually held them did he realize how enormous they were; he could barely grasp half of them with his fingers spread wide.

Soft and elastic, they were irresistible, the nipples hardening and erect from their owner's arousal.
Out of "revenge," he played with the breasts in various ways, pinching, kneading, rubbing, sucking—
trying every method he could think of, taking full advantage of the situation.

"...Pervert...you big pervert..."

the girl cried out passionately, pressing her chest even lower. Her legs trembled slightly,
not she was weak, but because she was on the verge of a breakdown from orgasm. Her delicate flower core,
under the repeated thrusts of the powerful penis, felt both sore and numb, both tingling and pleasurable, like a taut bowstring or a full pool of water,
needing only a little more force or a trigger to unleash her lust like a torrent.

What a beautiful feeling! In the moment before orgasm, the girl suddenly felt so happy she wanted to cry. She had waited so long for this
moment , been tormented for so long. No one knew why she played
basketball like a madwoman every day, never going back to rest until she was completely exhausted; no one knew how many nights she had tossed and turned, unable to sleep,
secretly masturbating with the corner of the blanket between her legs. She looked down at the aged face—the first
man to bring her pleasure—and a sudden thought struck her. She reached out and pulled off the blindfold covering his eyes…

Grandpa Qin's eyes lit up, a slight stinging sensation spreading through them. Then, the girl's figure came into view: her delicate face
was a mixture of pleasure, excitement, and shyness, her eyes glazed over, and she was moaning loudly; her vest was pulled up
, revealing a pair of unusually full and large breasts, half-concealed, changing shape under her kneading…



“…Grandpa Qin…I want…I can’t take it anymore…”

Shame became her last small strength and opportunity. The girl suddenly sat up, revealing her round
, firm, beautiful, and slender waist and thighs. Her large breasts, out of control, bounced and swayed, drawing ripples under the light
… She braced herself with her hands behind her back, her hips twisting wildly, making a final sprint to reach a higher peak during her climax
.

Seeing the girl's sexy and hot body, Grandpa Qin's eyes turned bloodshot, his blood boiled, and his penis became
extremely hard. He gripped her buttocks tightly, and with the last bit of strength in his waist, he thrust upwards fiercely.

The girl's body stiffened, her voice stopped abruptly, and she rolled her eyes back, taking a long breath...

"Oh—" With an extremely pleasurable roar, the girl's waist and abdomen suddenly arched, her vaginal muscles
twitched, her flower core opened wide, and a huge amount of vaginal fluid gushed out, her legs trembling uncontrollably.

Waves of gushing vaginal fluid flowed endlessly, her voice trembling: "...Ah...

Ah..." She cried out unconsciously for a full minute. The vaginal muscles enveloping the penis
contracted desperately, the force seemingly trying to tear it apart.

Finally, Grandpa Qin couldn't hold back any longer and roared, reaching the peak of his own climax. His glans pressed tightly against the tender flesh, and
thick semen finally erupted.

"No... No..." the girl cried, trying to dodge, but her limp body couldn't
break free from Grandpa Qin's arms. Her sensitive clitoris, still sensitive from the afterglow of her climax, received every last drop of the powerful ejaculation.
The force seemed to pierce her heart, the scalding heat melting her entire being.

"Waaah..." The girl cried, her body trembling as another climax descended, releasing several more streams
of vaginal fluid ...

...

After ejaculating the last drop of semen, Grandpa Qin felt utterly powerless, lying on the bed panting.
The intensity of this battle was unprecedented, almost costing him his life, especially his waist and legs, which were completely limp.

After a while, his soaring consciousness gradually calmed down. He looked at the girl, who had also collapsed.
One of her long legs was still draped over him, she was half-lying on the bed, half her breast exposed, tears still
clinging , her eyes closed, breathing slightly heavily, as if the afterglow of her climax hadn't completely faded.

Her appearance was slightly less striking than Liu Xiaojing's, but still quite pretty. Her skin wasn't as fair as Fu Xiaozhu's, being
somewhat rough, but her 1.8-meter height was something she could be proud of, and she wasn't the clumsy, bulky type; she
was slender and athletic, full of vitality.

Grandpa Qin, of course, remembered this special girl; he remembered her name was Chen Jie.

"Uncle Qin..."

After a long while, Chen Jie regained some strength and slowly sat up, her clear eyes gazing
at him intently.

"You...I..." Faced with her clear gaze, Uncle Qin felt inexplicably flustered and didn't know
what to say.

A warm touch came from his face; a delicate hand gently caressed his cheek, so tenderly,
so lightly.

His mind went blank; all he could see was the girl's beautiful face drawing ever closer...

...

Two beautiful lips landed on his lips...   At that moment

, the world seemed to lose all sound and color... What   did

it feel like? Sweet

, smooth, like the feeling of eating cherries for the first time... ( To be continued

)

**************** ...   The new character added in Chapter 19 was actually conceived long ago; the only physical education major in Dorm 127 has finally made his appearance. Qin Da Ye has a new pretty female student. I apologize to those who liked "The Gatekeeper" before, and this is also a New Year's gift to all my friends!   I won't say the childish "I will never abandon this project" anymore; saying it would be self-deception. I can only say: I will do my best. I can't guarantee the update speed either; I can only say: I will do my best.   I also have a favor to ask: if any friends know the current addresses of the websites "Lamb's Journey" and "Joyful Buddha," I hope you would kindly tell me, as that's where I first posted, and it brings back some nostalgia. Of course, whether I find those two websites or not, I will always be based here, always posting first on sis (if the moderator approves my posting on sis ^-^). When I first encountered erotic fiction, "The Gatekeeper" left a deep impression on me. I'm extremely honored to see the original author here, and I deeply feel that only such an excellent website can attract authors back. "Uncle Qin" was an exceptionally good and excellent erotic novel I read back then. The plot was novel and moving, and the explicit descriptions were very skillful, leaving a deep impression. I even "reviewed" it many times afterward. After it stopped updating, many authors on the erotic forum continued to update it, haha. Today, I actually saw a legitimate sequel! My jaw dropped! Keep going, author! Your old fans will continue to support you! Brother, I finally caught you! I've always been bothered by the fact that this story was abandoned after the 18-year-old part. I still occasionally reread a couple of erotic stories. I've read all the others' sequels, but personally, I don't think they have the same realism and immersion as yours. Brother, please don't abandon it again this time; I've been waiting for 5 or 6 years! PS: Another author I want to drag out and criticize is Shangguan Xiaoxiao from *The Smiling, Proud Wanderer*. Brother, please continue updating, considering I used your first 25 chapters as material for my fanfiction yesterday! My god, this is terrifying! Has this amazing novel finally started again? Qin Daye is increasingly heading in the direction of scumbag Cheng... It's truly the best New Year's gift! Qin Daye, long time no see! I didn't expect you to still be as skilled as ever, congratulations! Hehe, I hope to see more of your steamy scenes in the future! Haha, this old man is back! I remember this work from many years ago; it was truly wonderful! I still remember this wonderful work, and I especially miss Fu Xiaozhu; she was so well-written. I'm so touched to see the author's comeback. I hope you can keep going and finish writing. I love your old works, and I'll love your new ones even more. Thank you for your return. I hope you make this a masterpiece. I'm looking forward to it.

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