The Demon of Fuchun Mountain (Original and Alternative) (1-6) Author: Tang Twelve (logos himself)

Word Count: 12904

Preface

I recently wanted to write, but I haven't written in a long time. Picking it up again requires an adjustment period, hence this practice piece of erotic text.

This is my first time practicing; I just want to practice my descriptive skills and develop good writing habits by writing an erotic novel.

This will be an extremely explicit novel. I've written three chapters, and I'll post two to see feedback. Please feel free to criticize; I'm here for criticism, and I'll be extremely grateful if it helps me improve.
*bows*

A message to the moderator: I've been a member of this forum for seven or eight years and have never posted before. This is my first time. I spent a long time reading the forum rules, and they gave me a headache. I will try my best to follow the rules. Please forgive any shortcomings. This is my first time posting, so please let me know immediately if there are any problems.

I will revise.

The text above suddenly had a colored block added to it, leaving me completely clueless. I have no idea what happened, and I can't remove it no matter what I do.

Alright, enough of that. Let's begin. Content is more important.

I. The Meaning of Life

Dusk.

The afterglow of the setting sun bathed Mount Fuji in golden light, turning its millennia-old snow a golden hue, and draping a Tang Dynasty-style palace hidden deep within the mountains in a golden robe.

A few rays of sunlight, like swords, cleaved through the palace's gloom, casting a hazy, yellowish mist over the white marble floor, making the entire palace appear even more mysterious and distant.

At this moment, a woman kneeling in the main hall held an infant.

Perhaps due to recent childbirth, her slightly bowed back made her round, full hips appear enormous, inexplicably stirring the heart.

From the depths of the dimly lit palace, a voice, both alluring and languid, drifted softly: "Lu Sang, are you truly decided?"

"I have decided. Please, Lady Zi Ji, allow my daughter and me to enter the palace!"

"Joining my clan, you will lose your self, you will lose the meaning of being human. Have you considered this?"
Self? The meaning of being human?

Kneeling on the ground, Lu Yingying closed her eyes in anguish. The image of that man, etched in her heart and unforgettable, yet whom she also longed to devour and drink her blood, resurfaced in her mind.

Three months ago.

In a Mediterranean-style villa in Sheshan, a suburb of Shanghai.

On the sofa by the floor-to-ceiling windows, a robust, handsome man of about twenty was passionately kissing a beautiful, stylishly dressed girl of seventeen or eighteen.

The girl's pretty face had large, seemingly expressive eyes. At this moment, those eyes, with their long eyelashes moving up and down, opening and closing, presented a captivating and alluring expression.
The girl was being passionately kissed and caressed by the man. [The text then abruptly shifts to a seemingly unrelated anecdote:] "A child?
Heh, too bad it's a girl," Wang Feng thought with a hint of disdain, but his movements softened.
He gently helped the girl, Lu Yingying, to the French windows. Beneath her pretty dress, her belly was prominently swollen; she was pregnant, and judging by the size of her belly, she was about seven or eight months along.

Wang Feng hugged Lu Yingying from behind, gently kissing her crystal-clear, almost transparent earlobe. He touched her earlobe, neck, and shoulders with his moist lips, while his hands slowly caressed Lu Yingying's breasts, which were becoming increasingly swollen and high due to her pregnancy. Sometimes he would speed up, and the pressure on his hands would gradually increase, and sometimes he would slow down, teasing Lu Yingying's sensitive body in a rhythmic, sometimes fast, sometimes slow manner.

Lu Yingying writhed restlessly at Wang Feng's rhythmic caresses, feeling as if a million ants were crawling all over her. Between her legs, a warm current seemed to gather, causing her to clench and twist her thighs as if that heat might flow down her groin at any moment. Waves of heat washed over her, her throat felt dry, yet her mouth was brimming with saliva. A fire burned in her chest, and she longed to shout, as if only a shout could release the inexplicable, increasingly frantic restlessness within her.
She wanted to remove her cumbersome clothes, but Wang Feng restrained her from behind, forcing her to clench her legs even tighter to alleviate the emptiness she felt there. "

This body of mine! The doctor said I can't have sex during pregnancy, but with just a little caress from Brother Feng, I'm so sensitive I can't control myself. I want it so badly, it feels so empty down there. If this keeps up, I'll go crazy! Ah…
it's coming, I'm going crazy!" Lu Yingying closed her hazy eyes, and amidst waves of pleasure, she raised her sexy chin, stretching her slender, snow-white neck as far as she could, letting out a high-pitched, passionate scream. Her thin back straightened ramrod, her legs could no longer be clamped together, and in a rhythmic tremor, the crotch of her dress quickly became wet and darkened with the semen spurting from her orgasm, a wet patch like a drop of black ink falling into water.

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