杭州夫妻038
2021-12-09 13:54:56
Well written!110501

yyhhnn
2021-12-09 22:46:52
classic110501

今天绿了吗
2022-03-17 23:22:34
I was already impressed by the author's excellent writing in the previous chapter, and reading this chapter again made me want to write down my feelings. I've already commented extensively on the previous chapter, so I won't go into too much detail this time. I'll just comment on one point: the word choice is truly vivid and apt. I'm not sure if the author actually experienced these things, but she uses each phrase and idiom so realistically and vividly that it allows the reader to deeply experience the story. By vivid, I don't mean that the author specifically describes the plot details and scenes, but rather that she clearly and precisely depicts every feeling and sensation she experienced through words and phrases.110501
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