菲要挨操

2016-07-30 20:55:44

It seems a little unreal. I'm writing a novel.

供暖公司大连

2016-07-31 12:35:30

I was originally writing a novel.

洲际列车

2016-08-08 02:41:54

This writing style is uncomfortable. First, it reads like a student's own work, with excessive descriptions of their genitals. Such focus on their own genitals doesn't seem like the thinking of a normal man. Second, the teacher is this student's benefactor. Even if there are some disharmony in their sex life, it's inappropriate to portray them as focusing solely on their sexual organs while ignoring everything else. Is the bond between husband and wife solely maintained by sex? I acknowledge that sex is important in a marriage, but people have self-control, and women are even more rational. Third, this writing style makes it seem as if women would automatically submit to a strong, muscular man with large genitals, which is far too simplistic. Of course, the author's writing is excellent; I certainly don't possess that talent. I just had this feeling while reading. Thank you for sharing; it has shown us an alternative approach and broadened our horizons.

tank9700

2017-12-20 11:57:00

I agree with the Intercontinental Train's point of view; focusing too much on the portrayal of a single character is undesirable. The brilliance of humanity should be incorporated into the work. This article gives the impression of excessive use of lowbrow descriptions, neglecting other aspects.