pinsaluoyan

2017-10-11 17:10:49

Wow, what an exciting description!

jy888

2017-10-17 17:59:59

Honestly, I have no experience.

gao888

2018-03-30 13:24:04

While the plot development isn't as elaborate as Hu Zuofei's erotic novels, the descriptions are incredibly vivid and engaging—definitely a masturbation story, haha. I like the writing style, but the author didn't introduce his wife at the beginning; at least describe her appearance and voice! That would have allowed us to fantasize! I hope the author can improve on that!