2018-08-05 12:05:57

It was so exciting!

oudehong

2018-08-05 12:53:09

Hey everyone, I finally updated!

oudehong

2018-08-05 13:00:15

Something feels different.

寻你一起快乐

2018-08-05 13:01:45

Stimulate

@小猪！

2018-08-05 13:02:40

Dude, you're super popular!

royceid

2018-08-05 15:12:19

The master is finally back.

合肥夫妻361

2018-08-05 15:29:34

It doesn't connect to the previous content yet.

冲浪者

2018-08-05 16:30:15

What's even more exciting is that when you arrive at the scene, it seems your wife is no longer just a stay-at-home wife, but a great woman of desire who has transcended herself. She lives a free and fulfilling life.

有缘千里会

2018-08-05 17:19:39

Isn't your wife's lover Old Black? How did she become Ah Min?

在一次的请求

2018-08-05 20:24:37

Things are getting a bit out of control. Your inner self is also losing control.

丰少少

2018-08-05 22:27:41

Bro. Finally, an update!

liufazhong

2018-08-06 03:25:27

Haha, looking forward to it!

新手上路。。

2018-08-06 06:32:10

It's just a novel, so don't take it too seriously. It's okay to indulge in a little fantasy; the author's writing is quite good.

初心2018

2018-08-06 06:53:51

Would it be good for your wife to have a child for him?

认真生活

2018-08-06 11:44:33

Brother, I suggest you join too. I feel uncomfortable seeing it. It's better to be together, otherwise things really will change.

qbzz001

2018-08-06 11:53:50

Congratulations

YY1971

2018-08-06 14:29:26

This is too much!

Yongzia

2018-08-06 21:08:45

My wife is amazing!

pinyin6789

2018-08-07 08:19:14

I'll give you a thumbs up first, before I even look at it.

pinyin6789

2018-08-07 08:30:31

Ah Min doesn't follow the rules like Lao Hei does; he wants to do whatever he wants.

zuiai69w

2018-08-07 22:53:28

Impressive, I admire you.

吃擦擦

2018-08-07 23:48:41

top

smallj10

2018-08-07 23:52:00

This is so awesome, it's finally updated!

clw74

2018-08-08 04:08:41

It's not as well-written as before; it feels a bit perfunctory and lacks originality, repeatedly depicting the same scenes.

zhongzhuohu

2018-08-08 13:11:08

Bro, this story feels fake. While your wife is open-minded, she at least has some boundaries. For example, she doesn't sleep with Black men, and if she does, it's usually in a hotel, and the men she sleeps with are generally of high quality. She's also relatively reserved during sex (according to your description, she's had orgasms before). This story… clearly has the characteristics of online fiction. Promiscuous sex in the wild, even in urban villages, anyone can ejaculate inside her, and she's yelling about giving you a son… Bro, the popularity you've built up will easily disappear. By the way, this story doesn't connect to 15 at all. Who is Amin anyway?

wysyf

2018-08-08 15:32:35

You didn't even read the previous posts before saying my writing was disjointed and that you wouldn't write anymore. Bye.

seekl123

2018-08-08 17:17:57

Stimulate

老牛不吃草

2018-08-08 22:00:03

Be civilized online. Your post is well-written, but the person upstairs is nitpicking. What new ideas are you looking for? It's just a small thing. Changing the scene is good. Those who say it doesn't connect with 15 should go back and read 15 carefully. Those asking who Amin is should also go back and read the previous posts. Just treat it as a novel. Why are some people so picky? If you're so good, go write your own!

hljjjhw

2018-08-08 22:19:27

Don't pay too much attention to what those people say; we're still looking forward to updates! There's always a bunch of idiots who doubt this and that all the time. Let them say what they want; just be happy!

zhongzhuohu

2018-08-09 23:32:43

Brother, I'm commenting on your articles because I've been following them closely. You've written from issue 1 to 16, reading each one carefully, but I've never seen "Amin" mentioned. It's your freedom not to write; offering feedback is simply out of interest. Best wishes.

Yongzia

2018-08-10 00:26:34

Ah Min is in it, you guys just didn't read the beginning.

bmo1123

2018-08-12 20:19:05

Amin appeared in 11 posts. He went to her house to look for her, and in the afternoon he went to a hotel and had a threesome with someone. If you're blind, don't talk nonsense. And you've been following this all this time; why are there so many trolls these days? The author is just sharing their experiences; there's so much going on.

binglu

2018-08-13 00:23:55

I'd read a few of these before, but after seeing this update, I read it all again from beginning to end. I don't know if it's based on the author's own experience, but it feels very real. I can really imagine the changes in the author's inner feelings. It's very well written, and I look forward to more updates.

joyboy77

2018-08-14 16:14:31

I should talk to my wife about it when I'm hanging out with Lao Hei and the others.

色地主

2018-08-27 13:07:00

Dude, how are you going to clean this up?

人到中年也风流

2018-08-27 21:01:02

The plot is very exciting

晖9755

2018-08-27 23:38:31

I support the original poster.

ceef123

2018-08-31 00:38:49

Is there more? Dude, this is really great! Thumbs up! ...

hupotang

2018-09-01 22:08:58

Looking forward to the update, it's so exciting!

芊哥2018

2018-09-13 10:19:49

Great article, I've been following it closely. Keep it up, author! I'll always support you!

快乐就好！！！！

2018-09-18 15:04:16

I didn't see 15.

快乐就好！！！！

2018-09-18 15:04:53

Could someone please tell me how to get to episode 15?

weiwei2018

2018-09-22 12:39:01

Well written! Number 16 actually best reflects the development of events. Thumbs up! Wishing you a happy Mid-Autumn Festival and all the best. Looking forward to your number 17.

xyt8178

2018-09-30 00:13:59

If you don't know Amin, don't claim to support the original poster. Amin is someone I've visited before.

ddyyu

2018-10-03 14:38:35

Looks like this isn't going to end well, OP! I think you're even greater than Banner!! Looking forward to more. By the way, I saw a group sex video online a while ago, and the female lead looked a lot like the female lead in your story.

pinyin6789

2018-10-17 07:56:04

Brother, brother, please update! I've been waiting for this all day.

WBJ1224

2018-10-21 01:31:50

Looking forward to it, master!

不周师

2018-10-31 09:31:05

Bro, this novel is amazing! I'm begging for updates!

不周师

2018-11-04 08:12:53

A masterpiece, looking forward to updates.

不周师

2018-11-07 08:43:13

A masterpiece, looking forward to updates.

不周师

2018-11-15 13:26:54

Looking forward to updates, this is a masterpiece, bro!

qbzz001

2018-11-24 17:30:46

People yearn for their true selves.

今夜为谁雄起

2018-12-29 21:00:38

To be honest, it's fake. Putting everything else aside, even if you're just listening to a recording, I can recognize which one it is right away.

wysyf

2018-12-29 23:27:27

I checked your profile; you commented on four people's posts, calling each one fake. What are you doing here, you nitpicker?

蝴蝶养猫

2018-12-30 18:13:37

Why worry about what others say? So many people are waiting to read your story, isn't that enough to prove it's a classic? It's not worth letting one bad apple spoil your mood.