夕阳更可爱

2012-11-03 12:47:42

How can college students make so many spelling mistakes? And the woman and the man are unwilling to part? To tell your story truthfully, you must first reveal the content of your educational background.

夫妻间

2012-11-03 20:05:07

Nowadays, college students don't seem to care much about making spelling mistakes. I don't doubt that he's a college student.

天下湖人

2012-11-03 21:15:52

It's riddled with typos, rambling on and on, and impossible to understand even after reading for a long time. Even an elementary school student could write a better composition than this!

蜡笔哥

2012-11-04 18:36:54

I know it's a typo, but I'm too lazy to type it out. It's nothing special, I just typed it out on a whim.

真诚夫妻123呵呵

2012-11-05 11:25:32

The phrase "The sunset is more lovely" should be changed to "The sunset is more hateful." Which old geezer is always criticizing other people's writing? Why don't you write something yourself? Whether it's good or bad is up to you; take it or leave it. What's the point of commenting?

蜡笔哥

2012-11-05 20:53:45

Thank you for your support. I didn't write it as a literary work; it was just something I wrote as I felt.