2012-12-27 21:38:52
23 years old, 1.6 meters tall, curvy, single, C-cup, high sex drive. I hope men in or around Shishi can contact me. I'd love to experience the feeling of two men and one woman.60472

2012-12-27 21:50:51
Are you saying this kind of pervert is your friend?60472

2012-12-27 22:25:42
Is this kind of person worth associating with, worth writing about?60472

2012-12-27 23:13:58
So lewd! You have absolutely no manners.60472

2012-12-28 09:22:25
This is a completely fabricated novel!60472

2012-12-28 09:57:02
I like how single men treat their wives; the more beautiful and charming, the better.60472

2012-12-28 11:19:17
This kind of description is so bad that no company would hire you to write a novel. I hope you can write it more realistically. "[They'll all be yours...]" sounds like a movie line. You, the protagonist, are more like an invisible delivery guy! Don't forget you're the husband on the scene.60472

2012-12-28 11:24:01
Lustful thoughts, hehe60472

2012-12-28 13:12:02
Why did you write your wife like a chicken?60472

2012-12-28 22:34:06
Now I finally understand how powerful a third-rate screenwriter is. They really are powerful; they can make you feel disgusted and want to vomit amidst your contemptuous laughter.60472

2012-12-29 01:37:26
This is clearly low-quality fiction, either cheap street vendor literature or amateurish work.60472

2012-12-31 19:15:54
This is life! This is how we should live! I like it. Add me!60472

2013-01-03 01:54:52
How about writing a novel?60472
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