2014-03-05 08:03:58

The story is told smoothly

2014-03-05 08:44:51

A very detailed description, it reads like a novel, yet also like real life.

2014-03-05 09:07:20

I truly love how well this is written! This is the rhythm of first stirrings of love, the feeling of a heart fluttering in spring. So many women fail to grasp this subtlety, whether through affectation or wantonness, the imbalance leads to excess. Eyes bulge, eyes pound—like a deer's tail! With desire, one can observe its wonder; without desire, one can observe its manifestations. Both originate from the profound, the gateway to all wonders! Hahahaha!