【The Legend of the Swordsman】

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Author: anikey
First published on the forum on 2017/7/14
Word count: 4418
"Did...did it succeed?" In the doctor's residence, four unremarkable, scumbag-like men
circled around a girl in a blue dress, whispering amongst themselves and pointing at her, but taking no other
concrete action. They were all lustful but cowardly. The girl stood there blankly,
completely unresponsive to the four men's annoying behavior, simply continuing to stare blankly ahead. This situation was broken
shortly by a thin man with a rooster-comb hairstyle.
This man, named Zhao Jingfeng, had narrow eyes, a flat nose, and an indescribably lewd appearance. He and three other
mentally challenged individuals of similar appearance, personality, and martial arts skills were collectively known as the Five Mountains and Four Dragons. They made a living by doing odd jobs in Luoyang City and swindling food and drink
.
The woman in blue robes before them had a minor grudge against Zhao Jingfeng and his group. Her surname was Shen, and her given name was Xiangyun.
She was the only daughter of the renowned healer surnamed Shen from Wangyou Village. Her mother, Zhang Zhimin, had won the Luoyang Beauty Pageant over a decade ago, but tragically died young,
leaving only the father and daughter to depend on each other. A few days prior, Zhao Jingfeng had publicly professed his love to Shen Xiangyun, who was selling medicine at the market, only to
be rejected. His brothers, standing nearby, shouted to support him, but Shen Xiangyun retorted, "What's so good about your brothers
?" The three were speechless. That hesitant, unspoken look only
added insult to injury for Zhao Jingfeng, who was already utterly humiliated. The fact that the woman's protectors chased away the four of them was ironically a redemption for him, at least
giving him a way out. But afterwards, recalling this shameful incident—the goddess's cold words, the onlookers' mockery, and
most importantly, the speechless expressions of his three brothers who wanted to speak for him but couldn't—became a psychological
shadow. He felt that not only had he lost face, but he had also dragged his good brothers down with him. Of course, he was just overthinking it. His
brothers completely forgot about it after having a meal. It was only because he was heartbroken that he thought he was
a tragic protagonist unique to the Goryeo South Border Kingdom, which made him particularly bothered by it. In fact, the normal course of events is that he would return to normal after a few days,
but this time was a little different...
A few days later, the eldest brother, Lei Zhentian, inexplicably obtained a broken sword. Bored, Lei Zhentian
showed it off to his brothers, only to discover that the sword actually had special functions.
Lei Zhentian merely picked up the demonic sword, and it caused Zhao Jingfeng, the weakest of the four brothers, to feel dizzy and disoriented. The other
two were also dazzled. The others took turns trying to hold the sword, and it turned out that only Zhao Jingfeng felt uncomfortable at first
, but then felt perfectly fine. At this moment, Zhao Jingfeng suddenly proposed a plan to his three brothers: to use the dizzying
sword to drug and rape Shen Xiangyun. The three brothers scoffed at the idea, but Zhao Jingfeng became more and more excited as he spoke, describing his plan in a very detailed and elaborate way. Long Fei
and Feng Wu believed that as long as one dared to do something, success was guaranteed. He was originally terrible at speaking, and this so-called plan, in modern terms,
felt like something a primary school student would write in a fantasy novel—completely illogical and mostly based on coincidences. But
this time, Zhao Jingfeng had a strange, compelling force in him, making the three of them nod in agreement. They wanted to refute him but couldn't say a word. In the end,
when they came to their senses, they had already been led by him to the woods outside the village of Forget-Worry Village, where Little Fairy Doctor lived.
Lei Zhentian felt a headache coming on. He recalled the so-called plan: first, to scout out the situation of the Divine Doctor outside the village;
if only Little Fairy Doctor was in the Divine Doctor's residence,
then he would pretend that Sai Feihong, who was not good with weapons and was holding a sword for the first time, was injured while practicing swordsmanship and was carried by his brothers to the Divine Doctor's residence for treatment. Then, he would have Sai Feihong, with a sheathless longsword at his waist, stand beside Little
Fairy Doctor and subtly influence her until he successfully hypnotized her. His fourth brother kept telling everyone that as long as
they followed the plan, they could win the beauty and take her home to have sex, and all they had to do was cover for him.
From the beginning, the three of them never thought that they could successfully carry out this plan.
Whether the strange sword would work was another matter entirely; the plan itself was riddled with flaws. Even
the eldest brother, the dumbest of the four brothers, thought it wouldn't succeed. But when Lei Zhentian recalled
how his previously lifeless fourth brother had been full of fighting spirit when talking about this ridiculous plan, he, as the eldest, thought to himself, "If we fail, we fail. It's just
bad luck for us brothers. At worst, we'll just have taken a sword for nothing and have to pay for medicine. We need to get our fourth brother back to his senses!"
But things went surprisingly smoothly. They searched outside the village for a long time but didn't see a single person. No one
knew that the divine doctor and the villagers of Wangyou Village—the Seven Sages of Wangyou—had already made an appointment to go to Leigu Mountain to find the remains of the founder of Xiaoyao Valley
, and wouldn't return to the village for at least half a month.
Meanwhile, coincidentally, not a single patient came to the door seeking treatment, leaving only Little Doctor Fairy in the entire village. This, however,
made the three brothers uneasy. Only Zhao Jingfeng, as if possessed, insisted on the possibility of success. But the three brothers remained
uneasy. Finally, Zhao Jingfeng hardened his heart and plunged his sword into his thigh. Blood gushed out immediately. Seeing their fourth brother bleeding, the three brothers
hurriedly carried him into the village, shouting and screaming. This was not an act; the three brothers genuinely panicked at the sight of blood.
Hearing their screams, the woman rushed over without any suspicion, letting the four... As the patient entered for treatment,
Sai Feihong, who was standing to the side, took the opportunity to pretend to be scared. While Xiao Yixian was bandaging her wound, he kept talking to her
and even deliberately showed her the sword. The three of them explained the cause and effect to Xiao Yixian while Sai Feihong took the opportunity to
put the sword in her line of sight. When the bandaging was finished, the other two also said some nonsense to buy time. Xiao Yixian
clearly knew how stupid the patient's family was, so she pretended to be serious to deal with the three of them. As a result,
she was successfully hypnotized in less than 15 minutes.
Excited by the success of their plan, the four men were overcome with lust, yet
also hesitant and filled with guilt, unable to act. They merely circled each other, eight pairs of eyes locked, none of them
moving.
But the sight of the elegant, long-haired, pure-looking beauty standing unguarded before them
was a powerful temptation. Moreover, the events unfolding were exactly as Zhao Jingfeng had planned. The thought
of the beautiful woman before them, whom the four brothers could do as they pleased, drew them closer and
closer. Stimulated by the faint fragrance emanating from her, their initial hesitation transformed into
certainty of success.
Zhao Jingfeng was the first to act. He stared intently at the blue-skirted girl standing there, stunned. He suddenly recalled
the humiliation of a few days prior. This incident wouldn't have been a big deal for the four of them, these liars; even if it was because of a failed attempt to win her heart...
His wounded heart would eventually cool down with time, but just minutes before, he had told the goddess that his brother had been
stabbed while practicing swordsmanship with him, and begged her to help heal him. The goddess's gaze, as if looking at trash, seemed to mock him for only knowing how to cause
trouble. And now, unsurprisingly, she had fallen into his trap, standing right before her, defenseless, a woman who usually lived a life of being looked down upon
, treated coldly, and bullied by thugs. All of Zhao Jingfeng's failed life was blamed on the girl. Just as Zhao Jingfeng was consumed by rage and
about to commit violence,
the nameless, strange sword hanging at Sai Feihong's waist, known as the Hypnotic Sword, emitted a barely perceptible vibration. Zhao Jingfeng's anger
suddenly vanished completely, as if nothing had happened, leaving only endless desire.
Watching the fourth brother grab Little Fairy Doctor's hair and pull her over, the three of them remembered the mess from a few days ago and
sensed something was wrong. They were about to stop him, but the fourth brother simply pulled her over and forcefully kissed her head.
After a while, the three men relaxed, looked at each other and smiled, secretly amused that their fourth brother
had disregarded his sword wound for the sake of a beautiful woman. A little while later, their initial lustful desires and cowardly thoughts gradually disappeared as their fourth brother's kisses escalated
into wet kisses, cheek licks, ear biting, tongue probing into ear canals, and other increasingly daring, even somewhat perverted,
behaviors. This continued until one of them noticed a trace of saliva left on the corner of the girl's mouth from the wet kiss
, and he completely erupted, turning his attempt to stop her into a helping hand.
Jia Yunchang, jokingly called "the man with the biggest breasts" by his brothers, had bloodshot eyes. He threw down his broadsword and rushed forward, grabbing at her through her clothes
. It's no wonder Jia Yunchang lost his composure; Shen Xiangyun possessed the most despicable bust size in the entire story. At such a young age, she already surpassed
powerful figures of her generation like Feng Chuixue and Ji Wen, ranking first on unofficial bust size lists. Even the older generation
's "Mother of Women," Yi Lan, the "Yaksha Queen," could only concede defeat.
Back at the market, Jia Yunchang had already set his sights on these enormous breasts, but for the sake of his good brother, not
wanting to steal his brother's wife, he reluctantly gave them up to his beloved fourth brother. Of course, it turned out that this was just his own wishful
thinking. Seeing this, Zhao Jingfeng stepped aside to make room for his brother, gently supporting Xiao Yixian's head with his left hand and
supporting her waist with his right, enjoying Xiao Yixian's lips from different angles. Jia Yunchang's kneading force
increased as he became bolder, and the pair of blue-clothed breasts were constantly deformed by his kneading. He could also vaguely feel the two hardened and protruding points hidden under the clothes
. Finally, he simply pressed his face against Shen Xiangyun's well-developed breasts, while holding the breasts with both hands and pressing them
against his face, rubbing the breasts from side to side. Sai Feihong, who was holding a long sword, gently put the sword on the ground, thus being
a step slower. Although all the good positions were taken by his brother, he did not mind at all.
He, who usually prided himself on his footwork, not only had some expertise in lower body skills, but
also had a particular fondness for other people's lower bodies, especially beautiful women's legs and feet. He lifted the hem of Xiao Yixian's blue skirt and
gently stroked her calves as if they were works of art. After playing with them for a while, he took off her floral boots and played with each of Shen Xiangyun's toes, marveling
at their exquisite craftsmanship. Then, stimulated by Zhao Jingfeng, he hesitated for a moment before pressing the soles of her feet against his
face. While fantasizing about the goddess trampling on him, he inhaled deeply the fragrance of Xiao Yixian's sweat. Finally, he even
licked them, sucking on each of her toes.
From the very beginning, Lei Zhentian was only interested in one place: her buttocks. Due to his unusual physique
, he was much shorter than the average person, only the height of a child. His eye level was always on other people's buttocks.
Because of his height, the women were not wary of him. Over time, his interest developed into the supremacy of beautiful buttocks.
This time, Lei Zhentian did the perverted act he had dreamed of his whole life but never dared to do. He tightly gripped Shen Xiangyun's
buttocks with both hands, and then pressed his entire face against Shen Xiangyun's beautiful buttocks through her long skirt, not letting go for a long time. It could be
said that Little Fairy Doctor was leaning her whole face against his.
After a while, he suddenly had a new idea to share with his brothers, but in his excitement, he completely forgot that his
face was pressed against someone else's cold buttocks. As a result, his face, mouth, and nose remained pressed
against Shen Xiangyun's buttocks, making him unable to speak clearly and only emitting grunts like a pig. Hot breath from his mouth and nose kept spraying onto the little fairy's beautiful buttocks and
long skirt. After a while, he couldn't breathe and finally let go, speaking to his brothers. It turned out that he was signaling to them that
he wanted to put his head inside the goddess's blue skirt, and that the three brothers should slowly lay Shen Xiangyun down on the wooden floor to sleep,
while he would serve as her face chair, perfectly enjoying the feel of her buttocks.
After saying this, everyone realized that they needed to help the goddess undress before they could get down to business.
Just as the four brothers were groping the girl, beginning to undress her and preparing to take things further, Shen Xiangyun,
stimulated by something, began to moan softly. This further aroused the four beasts' lust. However, the hypnotic
sword that Sai Feihong had thrown to the ground suddenly vibrated. The four, blinded by lust, completely ignored it. But after a moment, Zhao Jingfeng stood up
and hurriedly told his brothers to stop. At the same time, he drew his long sword and swayed it in front of Shen Xiangyun, who was flushed and radiant with desire.
Only then did the other three realize that Shen... Xiangyun's eyes were much brighter than before, no longer
dull and lifeless. She seemed to be waking up. It wasn't until Zhao Jingfeng drew his sword that her eyes returned to their vacant state. While
everyone continued what they had just been doing, Zhao Jingfeng muttered incantations, giving the kind of post-coital cleanup orders unique to hypnotic novels
. He then immediately sheathed his sword, pushed his brothers away without explanation, and instructed the three of them
to act as if nothing had happened in front of other passersby. The group, still feeling unsatisfied, hurriedly left Forget-Me-Not Village.
As night fell, the four finally returned home. They didn't even eat, just sat silently together,
savoring the dreamlike, surreal experience they had just had. To them, the Little Fairy Doctor Shen Xiangyun was
a beauty they could never have in a lifetime; it was as if she and the four brothers were from two different worlds.
Yet, just now, such a strange thing had happened—something that even a erotic dream couldn't possibly occur. Thinking about this incomprehensible fact,
the group calmed down. Upon reflection, they realized the strange and illogical aspects of the situation, especially Zhao Jingfeng. He
had acted rashly in the heat of the moment, failing to consider such things, but now he realized he couldn't possibly have come up with any plan
, let alone dare to be the leader, much less stab himself with a sword. With that kind of courage, the four brothers
wouldn't be at the bottom of the martial arts world.
Most unbelievably, he actually knew how to use this hypnotic sword. The other three brothers each reflected on their own...
Having done a series of things that didn't suit them, and recalling various folk tales and legends, the four began to feel fear, and their
once vigorous little brothers went limp.
Just then, the image of Shen Xiangyun suddenly appeared in their minds, followed by various
hallucinations that shouldn't exist. A fragrance unique to her virginity wafted into their noses, along with the smooth, tender touch of her skin,
the taste of saliva as their tongues intertwined with hers, her breasts, her beautiful legs, her buttocks—the
wonderful sensations that the four had just enjoyed individually—simultaneously filled their minds and senses. The four were intoxicated, and before they knew it,
they fell asleep, leaving only the hypnotic sword placed between them, flashing with seven-colored light in the already dark room.
Temporarily finished.
This is my first time writing an erotic novel, and I welcome all kinds of opinions. I wrote this while I couldn't sleep, and it took me days to find it.
I deleted and revised a lot of words before daring to post it, so there are probably quite a few bugs, but I'm too tired to find any mistakes
. Please forgive me if you can.
Added a picture of the female lead.
After reading this, if you think there are any shortcomings or strange or awkward parts in my writing, please tell me. Because
personally, I usually don't notice any problems with my own writing. After all, when I excitedly write
a long piece, I only think that the piece is already perfect and it's hard to see any problems with my own writing. But
when I calm down, I see the problems.
Let me explain the process of writing this story. The reason I started writing it was because I couldn't sleep, so I
wrote down whatever came to mind. The writing went smoothly at first, but as soon as I finished, I realized something was wrong. I was supposed to be writing a hypnotic erotic story,
but what came out was a chuunibyou (delusional) fantasy battle story. I had only written the first chapter, and the sex scenes weren't even fully developed, yet a group of
powerful, behind-the-scenes characters appeared, creating a power struggle between multiple parties. After careful consideration, I decided to
delete or merge the unnecessary plot points, new characters, and powerful artifacts. After a
round of revisions, I was left with only a half-finished product, completely unusable. I had to rewrite the outline and start over. Halfway through, I found the sex scenes particularly unpleasant, so I revised them again and again. The result
is that the story now has no dialogue whatsoever—it's truly awful. At the time, I didn't think there was anything wrong with the lack of
dialogue. It wasn't until after I posted the article that I realized it was a problem.

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